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A
Short History of Collaborative Writing Technology
Use at Yale
Yale
faculty have been experimenting with collaborative
writing software for over five years. Writing
instructors, particularly during summer school,
regularly brought classes into Phelps classroom to
use the "Aspects" software package, which permitted
several students to collaborate on the composition
of one document in a variety of ways - e.g. taking
turns to write, all writing on their own paragraphs
simultaneously and having a chat window to discuss
the document.
In
the Fall of 1996 William F Buckley taught a college
seminar writing course during which he would
project from his laptop computer to a large screen.
He loaded the student writings (from a floppy
disk!) and would open them on a split screen in
Wordstar. With participation from the class he
would edit and annotate a document, and print out
the comments for distribution to the students.
Although one could see the comments side by side on
the screen during the class, the connection between
comments and original text was lost in print
form.In Fall of 1997 Mr Buckley began to use the
CommonSpace package, which enabled side-by-side
editing and saving of the revised documents for
student access after class. With CommonSpace the
side-by-side comments were preserved and students
could easily revise their original work.
Professor
Elizabeth Guzman's "Advanced Composition in
Spanish" (1998-99) was designed to help students
perfect their writing skills in Spanish as a
foreign language through systematic hands-on
practice. Composing in Spanish was seen as a
process, therefore, learners were expected to
concentrate on improving their communication skills
in writing through conferencing, peer editing,
planning, revising, and editing of their work and
that of others. Using CommonSpace software,
students composed (with the aid of the built-in
spelling checker, thesaurus and dictionary) and
then reviewed each other's work.
Professor
Guzman commented "Teaching Advanced Composition in
Spanish with CommonSpace has been a blessing to me
as an instructor. Firstly, it helps dramatically
improve students' fluency. Time is better spent,
revising and editing not having to hand write the
original text, but simply making the necessary
changes to convey a clearer message to a wide range
of readers. Secondly, CommonSpace provides me with
the wonderful opportunity to compare the various
drafts of a student's piece of writing and analyze
the strategies individual learners have used to
solve their rhetorical, linguistic, and mechanical
problems."
In
Michelle Fleming's English 118b class (1998-99),
"Writing Across the University," students worked on
styles and types of writing as varied as literary
criticism, behavioral observation reports, and
abstracts of scientific papers. Professor Fleming
used a laptop computer and projector to engage the
class in a discussion of student essays that had
been downloaded to the computer. To focus the
attention of the class, each essay was projected to
a large screen, while a student "CommonSpace
operator" recorded the class's revision and editing
suggestions during the ongoing discussion. These
annotated documents were available on-line for
further review outside of the classroom.
Collaboration
in English 114
Paula
Resch, English 114 Course Director, was interested
in Michelle Fleming's observations that the final
papers of students whose work had been critiqued
with CommonSpace software showed greater
improvement than those who received feedback in the
traditional way. She introduced the use of this
technology in four sections of English 114 (Reading
and Writing Prose). These classes use CommonSpace
software and interactive class web sites to foster
collaborative writing. As described by Professor
Resch, these enhancements include:
o
web pages that allow students to link to several
sites, including ones that provide some information
more effectively than the handbooks usually used in
the course;
o
CommonSpace collaborative writing software for peer
critiques as well as writing instruction in
general;
o
papers written and posted in response to the course
readings prior to class discussion of
them;
o
sample papers posted by instructors and read by
students to understand the type of paper that meets
their instructor's criteria;
o
in-class evaluation of Internet sites to determine
whether or not they are acceptable for use in a
research paper;
o
communications outside of class (using the
classes.yale.edu resources for email, chat and
newsgroups) such as posting sources they find
helpful for class discussion, raising questions,
and participating in chat rooms at designated times
with their instructors.
While
aware of the controversies surrounding the use of
technology in instruction, Professor Resch feels
that it is important for English students to learn
to look critically at how computers shape their
experience and how they are capable of shaping the
discourse of their age by using this technology.
She is also the recipient of an Instructional
Innovation Grant to determine the extent to which
the techniques and activities described above
result in improved student writing. For more
information on how these tools are being used,
visit the English 114 sections on
classes.yale.edu.
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